Erin’s 5 Word 5SC

There is a large house in the street.
The large house has a blue door.
A black puppy lives there.
It would be brilliant to play with the puppy!
I saw the puppy running away.

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12 Responses to Erin’s 5 Word 5SC

  1. Mrs Chadbond says:

    This is great, Erin. I love how you have made a little story with the 5 words – that’s just what Mrs Skinner meant! Well done for thinking so carefully about the sentences! Have a lovely weekend. Mrs C xx

  2. Mrs Bennett says:

    Well done Erin! Your 5sc is really great, I love dogs and your puppy sounds really cute! Mrs Bennett

  3. Mrs Vose says:

    Well done Erin! – I hope the puppy hasn’t ran away for ever, he sounds like a great play mate.

  4. Erin says:

    Thank you Mrs Chadbond, Mrs Bennett and Mrs Vose …. see you at school.

  5. Mrs Skinner says:

    This is a great set of sentences Erin and they make a super story. Well done for thinking hard about how you could link them all. I’m so glad you are sharing your work on 5SC.

  6. khadija says:

    very good
    erin

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  8. megan says:

    Wow Erin, this 5 sentence challenge is amazing! I loved how you used an exclamation mark! You have used really good adjectives like brilliant. Do you enjoy doing the 5 Sentenct challenge? Well done
    From Megan in 6D!
    http://www.6d.highlawnprimary.net

  9. Emilia says:

    Super, Erin! I love how you have made a story in so little words (like Mrs Chadbond said) I like puppies too especially how they sometimes have chubby little faces! Well done for winning the showcase! Do you enjoy doing the 5sc?
    Keep it up!
    From Emilia at http://www.6d.highlawnprimary.net

  10. sophie says:

    WOW! Erin your 5sc is fantastic! Your puppy sounds very cute! Like Mrs Chadbond I think you have been very clever how you have turned only five sentences into a story!
    WELL DONE!
    From sophie,
    class 6d

  11. Kasim says:

    Wow Erin! Your story is amazing as you have thought about your work before writing it. You have used the five sentences which is great. I hope that you get the puppy back and play with it because it ran away. Well done!

  12. Holly says:

    Dear Erin,
    I loved reading your five sentence challenge. You have described eeverything so well.You even used an exclamation mark. Maybe next time you could use some different openers.

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